Egg friend race

On monday room 6 had an egg race. We buddied up with someone, and had an egg race with other  kids at the senior park. We were all excited and really competitive.

When we got our eggs we drew their faces and named them. Our egg was called Omariz Jr and he looked ruth and cool with a scratch on his face. We came up with the name Omariz Jr because we mixed our names Omari and Mubz so we thought of Omariz Jr. He was born on Monday the 21st of september 2015.

After we named our eggs and drew their faces we walked to the park. Well we were walking to the park we were excited and nervous because we didn't know where we were going. Some of us were really nervous because we had to hold onto the eggs but Omariz Jr stayed in my pocket.

When we arrived to the park everyone was pumped and excited because we found out we were having a egg race. The rules were we had one person on each side and we had to walk on the playground and get the egg to our buddy with a spoon and they had to do it back to the side I was on. Some people cracked their eggs luckily when I dropped it because I was speed walking it didn't smash only cracked.

When we finished our egg race and were heading back everyone was happy and crazy. Once we got to class we had to give our eggs back but the ones with cracks had to go in the bin because they would smell and rot. We were acting emotional and sad but we were just joking, next time I want to do a remote controlled helicopter test.

My Recount Rubric

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Write for my reader	I've tried to think about my reader	My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.	My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.	My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose	I tried to meet the purpose	My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose	The message is clear in some parts of the recount.	My text fully meets the purpose. The message is clear all through the recount.
Introduction	My introduction /does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.	My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.	My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics	My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.	I have tried to follow my plan. Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.	My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea. I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.	My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.