My River talk's

                                    W.A.L.T:Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Last Thursday we went to our brown stinky ugly garbage creek. Back in the days people use to swim in it but now it is like a toilet in the wild that never got flushed.So can you help us keep the creek nice and tidy?

                      

Description:Today we had to write about what we are trying to do to help the creek and keep it nice and tidy.We had to use a short sentence complex sentence and a sentence with a question.

Chicken flavoured worms

Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Have you ever had chicken flavoured worms at Nine O'clock in the morning? Well we got fed like baby birds eating squiggly chicken flavoured disgusting worms. I thought he drank to much coffee cause he was hypo! Today we were writing about chicken flavoured worms. We had to write a question then a complex sentence and last but not least a short sentence relating to the chicken flavoured worms.

What I did on Monday?

W.A.L.T Follow the structure of the recount to produce a piece of writing.

What did I do on Monday? Well on Monday my sister had to goto a scan at the doctors. So I had to stay with my brother in’till my sister came back. She gave me my iPod and I played clash of clans. Its my favourite game and shadow fight 2 and you play online.

My town hall level is seven and I am level thirty eight. It was fun playing clash of clans but then it got boring and my iPod had got flat a lot of times. So then I went and jumped in the pool.

After a while my sister came back and I said “did you get baby Harper”and she said “no,not today”. Then I said “what took you so long”and she said that she had to take my brother to work. Then I helped her inside and she went on her bed watching movies.

At the end of the day we had burgers for dinner. Then my brother Ike came and had some burgers to. I was excited for tomorrow at school.

Description:Today we had to write a recount about what we did on Monday. I was not here so I had to talk about what I did at my house instead of Duffy. I mostly played games and watched TV.

My holiday highlight

WALT We are learning to Write our holiday highlight and put some detail into it for other people all around the world to know.

In the holidays I had my birthday on January the 14th. I got to go to rainbows end with my Sister and Brother. I had an amazing time, and when we came back my presents were on the couch. What I got for my birthday was a puma bag and a lunch box. But then my brother said what's in the lunch box? Then I opened it and I got some NRL gold coast titans shorts and knuckle bones. I was so happy and excited,I couldn't believe it.
Description:We are learning to write about what we did in the holidays. I chose to write about my birthday. We had to add detail and make it make sense.