My River talk's

                                    W.A.L.T:Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Last Thursday we went to our brown stinky ugly garbage creek. Back in the days people use to swim in it but now it is like a toilet in the wild that never got flushed.So can you help us keep the creek nice and tidy?

                      

Description:Today we had to write about what we are trying to do to help the creek and keep it nice and tidy.We had to use a short sentence complex sentence and a sentence with a question.